Time to go


Photo prompt by Ted Strutz

Closing time. Only losers like Brenda lingered, crying into their drinks. This place wasn’t helping—chaotic, like her life.

She realised at last that she was just an easy pickup, nothing more. She’d had dreams, once, of a soulmate who’d walk beside her along life’s rocky trails. Now she knew better.

Outside, the empty streets brought clarity. Brenda opened her front door with a new resolve.

She tipped his dirty socks onto the floor and scattered newspapers over the lounge. She dropped his leftover pizza into the bathtub, and walked out.

From now on, he could pick up after himself.


Another 100 word story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. You’ll find all the others here.

28 thoughts on “Time to go

  1. I guess he was a lost cause or she wouldn’t have given up. I hope she finds someone better. When he gets really old, he’ll probably be alone. I hope she’s not. Good writing, Margaret. —- Suzanne


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